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April 2017

99 Cent Sale!

Hi! I’m running a sale on all my indie ebooks through the end of April, 99 cents each!

(This includes the pre-order for Original  for Kindle)

Kindle: AUTHOR PAGE

Barnes & Noble: NOOK PAGE

Kobo: AUTHOR PAGE

(This sale does not, sadly, include my books from Penguin, as the publisher controls those prices. I wish I could put them on sale, but it’s just not possible.)

Original Available for PreOrder

The Amazon preorder page for my newest book, Original, has just gone up. This is the second book in The Horn trilogy (after Oathbreaker), and although preorders will be at 99 cents, the book’s price will go to $3.99 afterward.

Blurb (I am still working on this–as I’m told it’s a bit dry):

Dalyan was created by his Cince masters to find and resurrect an abandoned Fortress…but he never chose to serve them. Now he’s free from the implanted device that tied him to them. He’s ready to begin a new life, one beyond their vision for him.
Amal, Lady Horn is just grateful that Dalyan survived. But his very existence portends a new future, one with their long-time foes, the Cince, using ancient knowledge—learned from the time of the Originals—to invade the country of Larossa and their Fortresses. Now Amal’s Family must convince the Oathbreakers of the other Families that to protect themselves and their country, their Fortresses must be woken. And Salonen, the abandoned Fortress, must either be resurrected…or killed.

PREORDER ON AMAZON!

(An FYI for people who visit here: Oathbreaker will also be on sale the 15th through the 27th for 99 cents, and then go back up to regular price.)

 

 

 

I Don’t Think That Means What You Think it Means…

Once of the decisions writers make when they’re indie publishing is whether to hire someone else to edit their work. All too often these days I run across an ebook that could have absolutely used another set of eyes on it, and even though Spell Check does a great job catching misspellings, over-reliance on it leads us to the dreaded Spell Czech.*

A Spell Czech is when you have a perfectly good word in a sentence, but it’s not what you intended.

There are a few ways this happens:

  1. AutoCorrect messes you up, and you miss that mistake in edits.
  2. Synonym Finder puts in a synonym, but it’s not quite right.
  3. Homonyms trip you up.

 

AUTOCORRECT:

Now I think that all of us have experienced the first instance. You’re typing along madly and AutoCorrect is going along behind you and changing your words, often with comical results. You can turn AutoCorrect off, but I don’t. I cannot spell the words just or because without screwing them up.

 

SYNONYM FINDER:

I usually catch a writer doing this when they’re trying to be a good writer. They’re typing along and realize they’ve used the word ‘lectured’ too often. So they click on synonym finder and it tells them ‘bloviated’ is a synonym.  And we get this:

He lectured her on economics.>>> He bloviated her on economics.

Uh, this doesn’t work. Technically, the two words are, loosely, synonyms. However…lecture can be used as transitive or intransitive, while bloviate is pretty firmly intransitive. So someone who knows the word bloviate will find this jarring and…well, unfortunate.

 

HOMONYM MISTAKES:

These are easy to make. I had the word mantle in a manuscript for a long time before my mom caught that it should be mantel. Nothing will get a writer past homonym issues faster than awareness. Here’s a great list: Alan Cooper’s Homonyms.

Some of these we learn in grade school. It’s still easy to make too/to/two mistakes decades later, and the internet is full of they’re/their/there and your/you’re issues.

But what I’ve seen a lot lately is the more obscure ones like PEAK/PEEK/PIQUE.

One does not engage in a fit of peak.  One does not eat a hardy meal. One does not pay their dos.

(I’ve seen variations of all of those lately. They make me strongly consider putting the book down.)

Right or wrong, I tend to associate all of these mistakes with people who are not as well read. The last one in particular seems to be the province of someone who’s heard an expression spoken aloud, but has never seen it in print. (This is the opposite of kids who mispronounce words because they’ve only seen them in print, but have never heard them spoken aloud.)

I have to admit, I’ve had things edited, and we STILL find mistakes in them several passes later. However, a lot of these things can be caught by a copy editor. This is why, for my novels, I pay someone to copy edit for me. (Rick at EQP BOOKS is great!)

(I did several posts at my old website about things I learned from my copy editors. I still struggle with DUE TO/BECAUSE OF, though.)

So if you’re having problems, try a copy editor, and try to learn from what they point out…

*I don’t know who first used this term. It is not mine. I am simply not that clever.